Narrative - Rough story layout

              Rough Story Layout - Alien school romance short 

• Opening shot - Camera focused on cheese like floor. Space boot comes landing down slowing, to show lack of gravity. 
• Camera zooms out, shows space girl standing on planet in her space suit. Space girl does a big jump over the camera with the camera following.
• Space girl lands. Over the shoulder shot showing groups of aliens playing on the planet 
• Camera cuts to two aliens kicking a meteorite between them.
• Pans to and alien sitting on the ground who picks his nose, then scoops some of the cheese like floor and eats it.
• Shows alien with a lot of arms reaching over and pulling alien girls hair.
• Pans to three aliens playing jump rope with laser ropes.
• Camera comes back to space girl showing her face as she looks from left to right at the different groups of aliens.
• Space girl starts doing big jumps over to the group of aliens playing jump rope, camera follows.
• She arrives at the aliens playing jump rope and the alien in the middle jumping rope jumps out,
• Space girl jumps into the laser ropes but gets tangled up and trips almost immediately.
• Aliens playing jump rope start laughing at her.
• Space girl gets up embarrassed and jumps off to find another group of aliens.
•  Space girl jumps over to two aliens kicking around the meteor.
• When she arrives the aliens look up at her, then pass her the meteor.
• Space girl slowly pulls back her leg to kick it, when she kicks it she mis-kicks it and kicks the meteor into space.
• The aliens who where playing with it get annoyed with her and she gets scared then jumps away to find another group.
• As she is jumping along she gets pulled back and falls over by the alien who was pulling alien girls hair. 
• The alien starts laughing and walking towards her
• As alien is walking towards her from behind a big rock a spaceman steps out and trips up the alien. 
• The alien gets up then runs away scared of the spaceman.
• The spaceman slowly walks towards the space girl then reaches out his hand to help her up.
• Space girl hesitates at first but then takes his hand and he helps her to her feet.
• The space man and space girl look at each other while holding hand. They then start jumping along together.
• As jumping along a bell starts ringing. Parts of the alien world starts glitching out, aliens turning into humans, meteors turning into footballs etc.
• Everything slowly fades into a primary school playground and the bell is going to signalise the end of break
• Young girl and young boy are holding hands still.
• Camera zooms into girls face to show her smiling and blushing.7
• Finish

- Ian